being an athlete is the best job in the world even when it requires getting up early after long nights of studying because you trained for 6 hours and dont even want to get out of bed. being around people who have a common goal to be the best makes it all worth it, being an athlete makes every day…
I don’t think your blog is set up so that others in the class can comment on it; therefore, I am re-blogging what you have said here, and adding my comment here. I like that you chose to write about something that you are passionate about, and something that is so encompassing within your life. I did notice some grammatical errors throughout your post, and it is a bit short as far as length goes. Since this is something you are so passionate about, I would encourage you to expound upon it more. Perhaps, take one of your experiences being in sports and use it to fulfill one of the prompts for class.
—Allyson Crooks (fellow student of ENG 217).